September 30, 2009 | By admin In
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sorry a little lengthy
ok, so im starting a dance team at my high school. I typed a ltter got a petition signed by 100 people, and ahve a letter of reccomendation.I was wondering if you could read my letter and tell me if it is good or bad etc thanks!
LETTER:
To Whom This May Concern:
I am writing this letter on behalf of forming a dance team at Massapequa High School. I know many other schools both locally and not that have dance teams. I was actually inspired to do this from Career Day (career café). I was speaking with one of the individuals from the performing arts table and she was telling me how she started a dance team at her college. I do think the point of the Career Café was to take what you learned and apply it to life and what you do. I am well aware that there is Danceworks and Chiefettes. They are two great programs don’t get me wrong but, I would still like to start a legitimate dance team with auditions and everything. There is also a gymnastics team so why can’t there be a dance team too? Who is to say soccer, football, lacrosse, basketball etc. are the only sports? I feel like over the years, dance has become more so a sport rather then a hobby. My opinion is that as long as what you are doing involves a form of exercise, learning and its something you enjoy then it can be a sport. I am very determined to form a dance team at Massapequa High School and will putt all my effort into this to try to make it happen for our school. I have spoken with quite a few people from here and from the Ames Campus and they all agree with me. I will also find a coach (teacher form the school). I have a few in mind already. Also, we will hold fundraisers and carwashes to raise money that is needed. I have been dancing for fourteen years and I student teach as well so I have a lot of experience. Therefore, I would love to bring the art of dance to Massapequa High School starting in the 2009- 2010 school year. The only thing I need is the approval from you. I know you may be thinking “This is a joke”, “This can’t work”, or “It’s never going to happen.” I would deeply appreciate it if you could take this into serious consideration. It would really mean a lot to me. Thank you for taking time to read my letter.
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i dont know who wouldnt accept youre letter. you have details and you showed that youre determined and you would work hard at this dance team. im also a dancer, and have been since i was 3 and no exactly what youre talking about when you say dance is more then a hobby. good for you that you want to start something new and are willing to work hard at. my english teacher had us write a essay on a club we wanted in school and i did dance and this is exactly how she wants us to have the essay. good luck! please tell me if the club is on/off
Great job and hope it works Everbody school needs a dance team !
Very Nice job.You have some stroung points their.the one thing I would revise is “both locally and not” change the not to out of area or non-locally.I think the not mihg t be a tad bit confusing.Good Luck.I hope it works out for you.